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文章樓層:#1  文章dcm586er » 2004年11月21日 11:49pm

這是我翻寫的


刺 秦
立志達 畫 漫畫翻寫 BLACKSUN

第一部 荊軻

深厚的雲 蓋滿飄下來的初雪,潔白的梅花也以應天道 不理會世俗戰事勝盛開著
『又是一個冬天』此話在一位濃眉的壯士口中不斷地碎唸
他一次次喃喃自語的唸『這是我荊軻在燕的第二個冬天』 此人就是名劍士荊軻也是燕國泰子燕子單奉為的上賓
他所在地是燕太子單為他建造的花園之一 梅園

現在荊軻正處於壯年,不論肉體和智慧以達到成熟的地步了
荊軻直視插在地上的劍
荊軻眼前這把劍是荊軻的至友相贈給他的
對荊軻而言憑著這把劍,好似可跟千里之外跟摯友互相傳遞現在的狀況


荊軻抬起頭來眉頭一鎖,眼神專注在那快掉落的梅花,喃喃自語地猜測到掉落的時間當然就如荊軻所料想的一樣
也單手一揮,運起劍士畢生最難達到的境界-隔空御劍
順手一翻劍鋒由面地轉成面天,但荊軻不慌不忙氣若自然手掌一翻引導,單手一接的同時也順手揮劍,
揮動劍也不快也不慢移到梅花所掉落的路程中
好似早已知道抓摸不定的落下的梅花地點
荊軻抬頭一望,望的不是盛開的梅花而是天上降下來的白雪
『一切就在我的掌握之中』荊軻如此的說到
『就只差你了 蓋聶』


百雪紛飛,荊軻揮動摯友-蓋聶-所贈的劍 劍上的梅花也在空中漂動
飄動的梅花就如同敵人的劍 荊軻以劍相檔擋
『或許因大風雪之故,蓋聶遲了。已過了一天多了』荊軻在心中說著
一挑一擋一刺一砍,梅花就像蓋聶的劍荊軻灌注精神在劍上,舞動雙手,舞動腰,舞動全身
來回不知幾回 那幾劍全都是險劍,劍劍刁鑽,劍劍必須灌注精神
在一陣的舞劍之下,梅花又回到劍上
荊軻低頭看著落在劍上的梅花
荊軻心想『這也許是他在燕的最後一個冬天了吧』


但是就再此時荊軻此時表情瞬間轉變 躺在劍上的梅花從劍上掉了一瓣花瓣
這表情不是說自己今日運劍的不好 而是………………………….
無情的風雪不請自來的打在他身上


白雪不停的下 覆蓋住燕國的每一個山頭 唯獨松樹的翠綠才可跟白雪匹配上...............................
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